Our life is a thread but different people has
different ways of existence. That`s why such threads can be multicoloured, with knots
or may be torn not being knitted with others. Life can be spent in tears, be a by-product of the whole community being. But sometimes
tears can reduce our stress and absorb bad vibes, pour anger out,
make from vulnerable leaf a jubilant
blade.
A person is a flower. It is born, it is growing
and then it is taken off by the surrounding
world or old age. Childhood is a brick that searches for another bricks and
cement in order to build a great house, for the way to achieve the aims so that
it can have an impact on others, for
taking an interest in the world
because only your heart can tell you
what to do.
In this contemporary world, when business is booming, when it`s too hard
to live the life to the fullest only
instinct and heart prompt you the
right way. When the flower is growing different obstacles can disturb it (like
ivy) and sometimes it`s too late to consult
an expert. Life is full of predators and it is a natural competition. If to put problems into words you can`t
know what to expect from friends. They are like other threads that join you but
sometimes they are too unreliable to give
the secrets away.
Therefore, not to be cheated you should be guarded but don`t disclose private information at the same time. It does wonders for living in paradise.
And in the end you`ll be a flourishing rose, independent, ecstatic flower…
....different people has (have) different ways of existence....
ВідповістиВидалитиThat`s why such threads can (may) be multicoloured, with knots or may be torn not being knitted with others (structure of the sentence, parallel structures).
Life can be spent in tears, (or) be a by-product of the whole community being (different ideas in one sentence).
... make from vulnerable leaf a jubilant blade (word order).
A person is a flower. It (do you refer to a person?) is born, it is growing and then it is taken off (wrong phrasal verb) by the surrounding world or old age.
...another (other) bricks....
.... and cement in order to build a great house, for the way to achieve the aims so that it can have an impact on others, for taking an interest in the world because only your heart can tell you what to do (too long sentence).
In this contemporary world, when (where) business is booming, when (where) it`s too hard to live the life to the fullest only instinct and heart prompt you the right way. When the flower is growing different obstacles can disturb it and sometimes it`s too late to consult an expert (if you refer to a flower it doesn't make sense). Life is full of predators and it is a natural competition. If to put problems into words you can`t know what to expect from friends (what do you mean?). They are like other threads that join you but sometimes they are too unreliable to give the secrets away (maybe, because they can give away your secrets?).
Therefore, not to be cheated you should be guarded but don`t disclose private information (and disclose little private information). It does wonders for living in paradise (makes no sense). Thus (not AND), in the end you`ll be a flourishing rose, (an) independent, ecstatic flower.
To be honest, I like your comparison of a flower with a person. Indeed, when we are children we only start to build our lives and accumulate knowledge about the world. We are keen on discovering new things which are unusual for us. As a matter of fact, we absorb good as well as bad vibes which have different impact on us. By and large, we must listen to our hearts as solely they can tell us how to act in a particular situation.
ВідповістиВидалитиYour post caused a train of thought in my head. I agree that we can compare a human being to a flower. Some of the people are self-confident narcissi while others are modest violets. Broadly speaking, you shouldn’t neglect and underestimate your life because you cannot rewind it. So, be observant when you chose friends and listen to your innermost thoughts.
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